Not bad. The plot twist that the random witness was Johnson was a nice touch that genuinely got me. Story's getting better, same with production value. But still lacking in places, like with typos, the half-baked story that's alright but could be something more, and the interesting level ideas with a helping hand of some frustration. Long way down is broken too so couldn't finish it. Good thing there's a password system to skip! But overall an improvement.